Because of Feeling Bad

Because of Feeling Bad

A Poem by Jennifer Hopkins
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I am sorry I am not compatible
        With them.
I am not congruous nor in step
        With them.

And I understand how arduous
This juggling act must get
But you chose to show me;
Your out-of-wack piece of art.

I am still sorry that I am not harmonious
        Like them.
And sorry still that my efforts were
        Insufficient.

Perhaps this worst-case-scenario
Is avoidable,
By keeping me all to yourself.

© 2012 Jennifer Hopkins


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really interesting piece.. the ending quite surprised me.... the concept is brilliant.. I'm still rethinking the meaning.. and all I feel is more of your fervour, it's like a secret being revealed..

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Jennifer Hopkins
Jennifer Hopkins

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She's an easily loveable beast, And probably knows all the answers To why "I love you" is so much more powerful than "love you". Dancing through concrete fields and flowered high-rises. Her convey.. more..

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