I Only Wanna Talk

The words I write - so extreme

Just like a black and inky scream

Swirling inside.

You can't get left behind

When the truth is so clear,

Pulling you closer to hear;

Just lend me your ear and

I'll change your mind.

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

There is a nice rhythm and flow to this short and sweet poem. I guess in so many ways it alludes to the beauty of conversation--talking and listening.

well done!

[Lyrically Inclined]

The truth will set you free! Nice write!

[Chris]

The silence gets so loud - ya know?

[conversations with her ..]

"just lend me your ear"

i love that, this flowed so well. short yet so beautifully written!

I'm new on here, so it would be an honour if you could review some of my poems xo

[Rebekah Smith]

High praise indeed! I'll definitely look it over :) thank you

[emmajoy]

Short and very sweet, Rebekah.. there's almost a smile behind those words, yet, they'r beautifully put

This truly marks my card: .Just lend me your ea and, I'll change your mind. ..

[Rebekah Smith]

Thank you, for more than one thing: I wrote this in sadness, but you gave it a smile :)

[emmajoy]

That's good, sad times are when smiles come in useful. (Forgive my typos, have tidied now) .

[Paul Bell]

Feels like the words are screaming, but he's not hearing. Will you change his mind. Who knows.

[Rebekah Smith]

You think this is aimed at a man?

[Paul Bell]

Could actually be your inner self.
Or a woman.

[Rebekah Smith]

Maybe the world at large...I know it needs a stern talking to, love and guidance

[wordman]

i`ll change your mind,lol that sounds familar

[Rebekah Smith]

May I ask of the source of this familiarity?

[wordman]

lol,it relates to many people and situations in there lives,i guess it`s how you interpret