Thoughtful

Something really needs to happen - the only issue is that I must start it.

I need to be more matter-of-fact

'Cause when I start I try too hard and then I choke and I crack

I mean

I like to walk around and check the scene

Pacing my city, alone and unseen

But that's the way I kinda like it

Other people can be frightening

And although I'm craving love I'll always fight it

Broken b***h.

Too many broken bits.

And tryna piece it all together seems almost sadistic

But I'm smilin' now

While I'm wilin' out

Got the people that I love strong at the line of my brow

Means I'm thinkin' of 'em

That used to be a problem

Guess that means progression and I should stop being so goddamned

Hard on myself.

Unlock the prison gates.

With the keys held in my pocket

I've been refusing to take.

Such a prat

But I'm golden inside

Developing fast, and brimming with pride

Intelligence, no common sense and clumsy as f**k...

The world shall turn and watch the day I choose to wake up.

Reviews

[Gee]

So many frightened of giving themselves, opening up, being themselves, for fear of getting hurt. Got to break eggs to ma k e an omelette, or something along those lines.
Typical Brit bits in here which I love...such a prat, clumsy as f**k. Just about sums me up at times.
Thoroughly enjoyed the read biblical Rebekah

[Rebekah Smith]

Well thank you :) this is review really gave me a smile, because it seems like you're being real and are interpreting this in a beautiful way. Cheers!

[Jimmy Yetts]

A kind of spiritual hibernation.
Deeply perceptive and strongly self-aware.
Yeah, gonna be some coming-out party!

[Rebekah Smith]

Your review us a massive compliment :) thank you

[conversations with her ..]

you're so talented, keep it up!