Out

Out

A Poem by Rebekah Smith

Condensation on the windows
Feels like I've been chasing smoke
This whole place is full of bimbos
Foolish girls who have no hope
The floor is sticking to their plimsolls
And most of 'em are sniffing coke
There's condensation on the windows
And everything in me just broke
Get me out
Get me out of this life
Get me out
Get me out of these lights
Bullshit conversation
You cannot break the ice
Just GET ME OUT
Get me out of here tonight.

You see their bodies in the bathroom
Sucking in and padding up
We're all enclosed and no one has room
Like coffee grains crammed in a cup
It starts to spin, will fade to black soon
You need to button that shirt up
You see their bodies in the bathroom
And half of them are throwing up
Get me out
Get me out of this life
Get me out
Get me out of these lights
I don't want to fit in
Seen what that life is like
Just GET ME OUT
Get me out of here tonight.

It makes no goddamned sense
Abandon this pretence
We are incredible
Shiny souls within us all
And it's indelible
We echo nature's call
I close my eyes
I feel the signs
We're on the edge
We're going to fall
We're on the edge
Step back or tumble

There are hands touching my waist
My body burns
I'm about to flip this place
These men don't learn
So I'll spin round, I'll slap your face
I don't care what you earn
There are hands touching my f****n waist
Who do I destroy first?

© 2017 Rebekah Smith


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You sound like a girl who forgot to pack her baseball bat that night. We're living in times of debauchery now. Though i must admit. I hate smack heads.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rebekah Smith

7 Years Ago

You're not wrong....I love livin' free, but not to the point where I smother the existence of those .. read more
Paul Bell

7 Years Ago

You'll be a boxer then. lol
Very well done. Your frustration is almost tangible!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rebekah Smith

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :)
The Iron Horseman

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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Rebekah Smith
Rebekah Smith

Bristol, South-West, United Kingdom



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