She Wasn't Ready

She Wasn't Ready

A Poem by Rebekah Smith
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Sigh.

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I'm wrapped up in black
Like a vampire bat
Sucking life out of the dark,
As I make my way down to the park
My
Mind feels like a skip
Filled with rubbish, filled with s**t
With a theme tune of the music from my past.
There's a feeling like rising water
In a room that's just too small;
There's a sound like that of glass
When you throw it at a wall and
I don't think that my mind is ready.
No - it isn't ready, not at all.

© 2016 Rebekah Smith


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With a theme tune of the music from my past. I loved this line. You have very well expressed your feelings. Loved it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rebekah Smith

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome

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Rebekah Smith
Rebekah Smith

Bristol, South-West, United Kingdom



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A Poem by Rebekah Smith