Sweet Music?

Sweet Music?

A Poem by Rebekah Smith
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I'd appreciate some comments: really not too sure on this li'l guy.

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It's hard to see so clearly
All the strings of others' lives
All their pieces
Stripped & open -
Lying naked in my gaze.
I hear thier memory's echo
See truth swimming in pooling tears
I can retune these strings -
I can make you play in harmony.

But who is there to make the musician sing?
To tighten up their loosened string?
Does the fixer get a hand?
Just someone to understand?
It's a request more than a demand,
But somebody please come & retune me.

© 2016 Rebekah Smith


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Added on June 1, 2016
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Rebekah Smith
Rebekah Smith

Bristol, South-West, United Kingdom



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A Poem by Rebekah Smith