Let me stay

Let me stay
In the shade of your love,
That turns thugs into priests,
In the comfort of your succulent lips.
Let me stay.


In this fountain of happiness and joy,
Inspired by your radiant smile,
Let me stay
Stay for all eternity.

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems

Reviews

[Lori Brown Boniciolli]

Nicely written; particularly like lines 2 and 3.

Sincerely

Lori Brown Boniciolli