Poem 4 Creative Writing - Colin Miller

Musical Genius

Would you understand?

I’m thinking out loud.

But hey, admitting is the first step.

And I know I got the worst rep.

 

 

Grab that cash.

Make a stash.

But your hearts in the right place.

Paying life’s tool so appreciate the chump change.

 

 

 

Baby I aint got no plan.

And that stress is a mess so I might smoke.

I’ve been walking tightropes

Would you understand?

 

Author's Note

this is a 10/10 poem if u rate annything below a 10 i will have to delete this poem as it will hurt my feelings :(

Reviews

[lettuce]

"Would you understand". I really appreciate how you gave thought to the person you were expressing your feelings to, it's selfless. A hero is somebody who is selfless, who is generous in spirit, who just tries to give back as much as possible and help people. A hero is someone who saves people and who really deeply cares. Even now, we make no apologies for the choice we made. The sacrifices we made were selfless. The options we offered were patriotic while the paths we chose were well thought out. Through selfless work, love of God grows in the heart. Then through his grace one realize him in course of time. God can be seen. One can talk to him as I am talking to you.

[Caulder]

Absolutely disgustinggggggggggggg

[Peter_Huedepohl]

Aye girl dis real gud.! keep up gud wurk u do big things mane

[Colin Miller]

wow 10/10 WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW