Sea of heartbreak

Oh Love,

Is it such a botheration to you

That I sit in seclusion?

And are you harrowed, Love,

By my unwavering endeavour to maintain distance?

Are you pestered by my

Bitterness at your madness,

Or rather too proud to have one

Who discords all which you denote?

Do you take pride in knowing

That I will forever relapse

And ingest your poison?

I have wandered the earth, in misery, 

With pain of rejection.

And Love,

Am I destined to be imprisoned

With the heaviest labour of

Emotional dealing?

Was I cursed, Love, into a time loop

Of torturous and unrelenting non-acceptance?

Will I ever be extricated from your

Sea of heartbreak,

And will I ever witness the bright

Rays of the lighthouse at shore?

I have wandered the earth, in misery,

With pain of rejection.

Reviews

[Aethereal]

Congratulations! This free verse poem was a sure thing to win the love poem contest. I was intrigued how you personified the mood of love whereby you express how it rakes you over the hot coals of rejection. It’s much easier to love than to expect love from others. Some people are so needy for love that they invent imaginary mythological gods , goddesses, and sprites to fill in for what would be otherwise absent. The bonding instinct is strong within the human species because it’s an evolved survival trait.

[Wall Hermitt]

Thanks, friend, for this wonderful review!

[Wynter Page]

Oh my god! This is beyond amazing! I'm just, I'm speechless!
"Do you take pride in knowing
That I will forever relapse
And ingest your poison?" I can't get over the perfection of that part.
Such beautiful emotion scripted so musically!

[Wall Hermitt]

I definitely like that you enjoyed this piece. Makes me feel relief as a writer. Thanks a lot.

[Yours sincerely]

I agree with the previous comments. This is truly a beautiful poem with a lot of deep emotion conveyed.

[Konigin]

woah. Wall, you stole my breath. This is BEAUTIFUL! :) I love the strong visions you made with your memerizing words. ^,^

[Wall Hermitt]

Thank you so much Chelsea. I'm extremely glad that you liked it.

[Konigin]

You are so very welcome! ^,^
How have you been? Inspired I see. Finally!

[Wall Hermitt]

Yes I was inspired eventually after frustrating efforts.

[Konigin]

haha. Well good!
I finally overcame MY writer's block last night at midnight and stayed up most of the morning working on my novel! XD

[Wall Hermitt]

Sounds very exciting. If your novel is anything like your poetry it must be outstanding.

[Wall Hermitt]

Was working on one myself. Finished the first draft and got too lazy

[Konigin]

haha! Thanks for the compliment! But I doubt that anything I write is worhty of such high praise! :)
Nice. That's where most people get stuck. haha.