Web of LIfe

Connected I am you. Eternal and selfless. Always abounding. rising and falling like waves. They reach out and touch every living thing to fill them with warmth and make them glow and shine until it hurts to look will you look? and learn. of things and sounds, words that this world can not comprehend.

Author's Note

Sorry about the bad punctuation, I care more about the words less about all of the technical period there comma there stuff.

Reviews

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Nicely written, Sarah. This poem just flows like a sloping river. I am impressed.

Good work!

[Adam Adams]

Everyone's nicely stuck in such a web of life where dreamers live in dreams & the real ones tryna chasing their own misfits, for no reason. Kinda deep and intellectual words you poured in a sheet of poetry. Would like to see what you bake more on it. Keep it up!

[M P Ramesh]

sarah,
It's some what easy to narrate from outside
unaware of failures
but from inside it's really challenging
Is'nt it?
ummmm
...........
no choice at all for a writer and it will end up with sigh of relief like the one above

carry on..

M P Ramesh

[Sarah Jane]

You should explain more of what you were saying in that comment, I'm interested in what you meant by it. :)

[JaneFoxscale]

Keep up the amazing work!

[Sarah Jane]

Thank you so much!

[Inject Positivity]

Well to be honest you took me to a journey of another world....I believe what you are trying to tell the reader have been achieved.....Poetry is something that can be filled with comas and fullstops in our mind, it needs to be felt by heart and this is just your start so im sure you will get better......You can edit your works anytime you want.....God bless you.....Keep believing and keep writing....(Dhiman)

[Morgan Yai]

Well done again. You are talented for sure. Don't Stop writing. You're doing great!

[Sarah Jane]

Ohh thank you so much!

[Uche Paul]

Your words are magnetic. It all seems they are meant to be used together in such a manner.

[Sarah Jane]

Thank you for saying that, it means a lot.