Waiting for Inspiration

 

 

When the magic fades

And the sky goes dark

We try our best

To make it all right

We shed no tears

To show our hurt

Else we are weak

We smile our brightest

And find the sun

The clouds will drift away

Our sadness remains

But the flowers still bloom

And suddenly

Everything doesn't seem

So hopeless and dark

Any Longer

Author's Note

Only felt like stringing words together. What do you think? It really had no meaning, but maybe you can find one. Hoped you liked it and thanks for reading, and thanks in advance for any reviews. :)

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

It paints a beautiful image of remission, and overcoming the hardships of life. We just got to keep going, because he sun will always rise, the flowers will always bloom, and life will always go on, whether we're ready for it or not. Very inspiring. Thank you.

[Skye]

Thanks =)

[SheActsLikeSummer]

I really enjoyed this. It's beautiful and there's nothing I like more than metaphors... well,no,there are lots of --- but that's not the point. The point is that this is excellent. :)

[Skye]

Thank you! :D

[Michael X]

colorfully whisks the reader away with a sense of inspired renewal
of a happiness within struggle to obtain understanding, excellent

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Once again, WHY DO YOU WRITE SUCH INCREDIBLE FREEVERSE?!?!

[MR_BREAZE]

I wish it were that simple. Yet I like it. Cause I really wish it were that simple.

[Nami Machae]

very very good girl! as always lol.

[Renée]

Well your expression sounds like you are rising above..finding hope...

[♥ Kinnixk]

I got the same vibe as icaro13. Great poem :)

[icaros13]

Life goes on... That is the message I got from this. I needed to be reminded of that today. Thank you, Skye

[Distant horizons]

This feels to me like the answer you seek wasn't forthcoming, yet instead of anger, you find positivity and accept that, until that answer comes, there are beautiful things in life to be seen. I like the positive ending.