Purgatory

Waiting in this tattered silence,

Blank stares facing the wall

Words unspoken,

A clear unbinding

Nothing living here

Then how can I survive?

All their sense has long been taken

Their will, it seems, is broken

And their souls are empty, bare

The life and spirit, beyond these walls

Bekon me as Sirens

Will, and love, yet sacrifice

Holds beauty all its own

While I am bound, so lost with time

Chained up against the wall

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

It sounds like a person was chained in a dungeon and forgotten about, maybe purgatory is a place nobody wants to go to. Many of the rosary ladies program themselves for purgatory because that is where they want to go. Something like that?

[Seanh12]

very good, i like this poem. It uses simple language and its easy to follow. It has a good structue. Very good well done. Very good ending

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a poem that goes barefoot on the beach...
simple language constructed in a different way...reminds me of lyn lyfshin.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is quite an impressive piece...you are writer far beyond your years.

the ending is perfect.

jacob

[Skye]

Ive been told that often :) thank you for your review

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While I am bound, so lost with time
Chained up against the wall
I think I cried on that part, such pain. An amazin poem! 100/100 :D

[Skye]

xD Thank you :)

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No problem! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Purgatory is a interesting place. Allow you to be in the middle of good and evil. A old poet said in old times. "Too black for heaven and too white for hell." Many of us will dance forever in Purgatory. I like the description and tale in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Skye]

thank you :)

[zainul]

Very well penned.
Enjoyed it.
Please check the spelling of "Bekon".

[Skye]

Sorry about that xDI will fix it later today :)

[zainul]

It is not that emergency.
Just do it in relaxed mood.
It may be a slip of pen.
Thanks for stopping by xD

[lee von cleef]

A cocoon on the wall mental willing ,throws thoughts out as bait to catch a fly,and now me .

[Skye]

Thank you for your reveiw =)

[Fighter/Lover]

Amazingly written, its beautiful