Wishing Well

how I wish the world was sometimes

I sometimes wish for brighter days, and lighter words to grace my lips. I wish to let myself relax more freely as a dawning calm takes over. No more unanswered questions will ever reach my ears, as something more than I can ever be leads me toward a greater being. Where understanding is more than just a fleeting thought and acceptance is grasped easily for those who have longed feared it. Rain is not berated for the darkness that it brings and sunshine can find its way to those who have not ever seen it. Thoughts can spread their knowledge and wisdom with no interference of shallow minds that will stifle their true meaning. 

That is my wish each time I toss my coin into that well. 

Author's Note

This isn't really a story, but it's not a poem either, so I'm stuck with it. Tell me what you think and as always, thanks for reading me. :)

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

a wonderful wish. hope it comes true :) ~em

[Skye]

I think any of us would :)

[Levi Levin]

I think we all think like this sometimes. You did a great job of pulling the emotions from your "well" (heart).

Levi:)

[Skye]

Thank you :)

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

A most wonderful write by a very wise 15 year old! What an old soul you have and how lucky it is to be coupled with your mind!

[Renée]

Could it be a prose? What ever it is ..you did a lovely job as always !

[Skye]

Thank you Renee. :)

[Fighter/Lover]

Interesting. I like it

[Skye]

Thanks. :)

[Owlgirl]

Great job! I love the imagery and power in it! This is epic and truthful, enchanting, and mystifying.

[Forever Hidden]

What is your real wish when you toss a coin into a fountain?

[Forever Hidden]

I'M SOOOOO SORRY! I PRESSED ENTER AND ACCIDENTLY PUT 10 AS A RATING WHEN IT SHOULDV'E BEEN 100! SORRY! :(

[Skye]

Its alright! :) My real with is for things to be much simpler then they are now, with less confusion and misunderstandings.

[Forever Hidden]

But, if it was simplier, then they might not have cheese on top of pizza!

:P

[Skye]

Lol I said simpler not tasteless!

[The XYZ Writer]

LOL!

[Forever Hidden]

Sorry my sis was on her account and she didn't log out, so I said it on her account......

read moreSorry my sis was on her account and she didn't log out, so I said it on her account......

[Skye]

Your fine. :)

[Hope]

I liked chick keep writing everything lol :))

[Serenity Faith]

Superb Skye! What a wonderful wish you have, now if only we could make the wish come true....

[Skye]

Thanks. :)

[T. Logan]

This is beautiful! Wishing wells should work. I'd be insanely happy if they did. :P

[Skye]

So would I. :D