Rightfully Mine

With patient eyes

I take the world

One moment at a time

I see it for not what it's worth

But what it simply is

Author's Note

Whatcha think? Thanks for reading me!

Reviews

[Sam Gregory]

This is good, it can be good to see things this way but I tend to see what things can be also tbh. Good write, provokes thought tbh

[Renée]

I think it is a perfect beauty Skye !

[Skye]

Thanks :)

[icaros13]

Patient eyes that see the way things are... Patience has served me well over the years, and so has being a realist. I can see things the way they are, unless I'm in love.... Love it.

[Serenity Faith]

Beautiful Skye! If only everyone could see the world through your eyes. It might be a much better place. Too much destruction at the moment sadly. Very nicely written.

[Owlgirl]

Powerful and depthful, it's magical and pure, beautiful and enchanting, elegant and graceful, and simply amazing :)

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

Beautiful, patience and insight. Simple and pure emotions.

[Hope]

Good!

[Forever Hidden]

It was a pleasure reading this poem, as always!

[Kerri Hart]

beautiful

quick, and striaght to the heart

[Distant horizons]

Lovely