Falling

It is more than me

As I take my final step 

At last I am free

Author's Note

So I've had this scene in my head for about a year now, I've tried writing it out like a short story, then writing it as a free verse poem, but I felt like I could never portray exactly what I wanted to. I guess a haiku can say more then a million words put together.

Reviews

[Courtney]

I've been there before, writing can be frustrating at times. I like how its short but it is in a way, very deep. Sometimes those are the best poems. Good write.

[Arik]

Excellent Haiku, I love how you were able to portray such an emotional, and sad moment in only a few words. Although I have to say as someone who has felt that way, I'm glad I did not take my final step.

[Skye]

So am I.

[Distant horizons]

Sometimes the hardest images to portray are the most elusive for a reason. I love the simplicity in the complexity of your words here.

[Skye]

Thanks so much. :)

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

The depth of a person, many times will be found in the depth of the simplest of things. This poem is one of them.

[Skye]

Thank you, I appreciate it.

[Jon Settle]

Truly amazing Skye, it's beautiful. :)

[Skye]

Thanks :)

[Summer'sBreeze]

Wow.
So much in so little.
Amazing. :D

[Skye]

Thanks :)