Turning On Yellow

the fewtch

Take two
watching cars,
old broke love

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we either hesitate with love, or accelerate towards it...i love the Yellow light idea...the caution light...

but do we feel more red because of past loves that didn't work out, or do we feel free to speed towards it.

nicely done ..."less is more"

and you master it here.

j.

[mournful bear]

you wrote enough too read too much into it. we all add ours into it & read sooo much; which is true, for most of us. thank you, for putting so many words in something so messy in most of our lives. great write! keep them coming!!!!!!

[Shannon]

Brevity at this level difficult to achieve. Good for you!

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice place create by your words. Left reader with location and thoughts. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote