American pASS TIME

The Fewtch

Give me

a match

and she'll split

like fireworks in

a Pepsi can

Reviews

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Makes me think of butt cracks lol.

[The Twin Arenas]

Yeah, that makes sense. I'll take that as a success.

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Totallyyyy

[marcus]

IGNITION........YES!!!!!!

[B]

Passion

This is passion

waw

[The Twin Arenas]

Thanks, Nis. If it ain't, somebody drag me outta the ring

[Jerusalem Cricket]

shhhhiii, what a thought. also, pepsi & explosions..umurrrica

[The Twin Arenas]

Never thought COke

[KWP]

ha!

I stopped in to see what your mind had conjured up today - as usual - not disappointed - you have a definite talent in obscurity - love it X

[The Twin Arenas]

As long as I don't disappoint.

[Vanesa Markovic]

I adore short poetry.
It takes real skill to say a lot with a few lines.

You've said a lot.
-VM

[The Twin Arenas]

Thanks, Vanesa. The image of jamming firecrackers into a pepsi bottle is both sexual and supremely American to me, and there's something about AMerica itself that is supremely sexual to me as well. Filthy and airbrushed and crusty with sea air and freeway dust all at once. Match is word that is the fixing of a couple, as well as the tool needed to bust flame. I liked this one. It's f*****g quick and explosive. Sort of like f*****g quick.

[Vanesa Markovic]

See, I knew you said a lot.
:P

[The Twin Arenas]

that's the point, right? Nothin' to say, don't pick up the quill.

[Sydney]

This could be interpreted many ways, which is my favorite type of writing. In such few words, this is still very enticing. I get a feeling of instability from this..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what a sound that would make....reverberation of the culmination of explosive feelings.