American pASS TIME

The Fewtch

Give me

a match

and she'll split

like fireworks in

a Pepsi can

Reviews

[Enigma Monster]

Haha! Very nice indeed. Short but thank god not sweet;)

[Veronica Staehle]

A little side smile, fresh delight- nice words for this quick bit right 'ere

[The Twin Arenas]

ugh. i don't know about this one.

[The Twin Arenas]

it's kinda tasteless. i like the double uses of the word "match" but i think that's about all it has going for it. thanks for the read, though. glad you're still stompin'

[Veronica Staehle]

Nah, a little cheeky is all. Nothing wrong with that. It is a nice play on match.

[The Twin Arenas]

The weather must've been good when I got after it.

[Corset]

I wonder about the capitalization on this , A*s Time, intentional? Cute, male, testosteronal, who doesn't like Pepsi?

[The Twin Arenas]

Yeah, more or less. I wanted to write something short and dirty.

[J Lee]

Love your play on words. Never been much of a poet myself. But after reading through some of your's, im feeling inspired. Thank you!
Keep up the good words :)

[h d e rushin]

somehow I sense the pornography of this image. but I tend to sense the pornography in every image
now adays...........dana

[The Twin Arenas]

"somehow I sense" is my mantra, when it comes to what I'm trying to do with my writing. Thanks for the read, ya perv. :)

[Olivia]

I love this I also love asses too

[The Twin Arenas]

yeah, I'm glad you got that. I had another title that was equally clever, but I can't remember it.

[Cory Barrett]

Take it in two, its easier to chew

[writing mojo]

Crotch rockets with screaming witches after the grand finally.. very clever my friend..exellent piece

[~]

I like your sexy humor! :D

[The Twin Arenas]

hahaha. first time for everything, I suppose. Thanks for the read, moons.

[Ruth]

Crescendo! Really like this :)