O' My Stars

O' My Stars

A Poem by The Twin Arenas
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the fewtch

"
galactic belched air
leaky heaven
a wet wet dead
new enamel cave
hanged stunk
for our seconds
helping

The Very Breath Of The Lord
is a sour wine metal song.

put back on
all that weight
you lost, baby.

I love U too death








© 2015 The Twin Arenas


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nice ! i like new "enamel cave" everyone, today, is focusing on how they live fancying their living spaces to look like "new enamel cave".

Posted 9 Years Ago


I liked how you used the short sentences. Making the reader use their imagination. You had love, God and death in the same poem. A interesting write. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago



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