Night Table

the present.

Slipperiness brings people together
because it makes them fall

Don't go
believing the mild
winter is pathetic
fallacy.

Reviews

[Cindy Marietta]

Haha wow. Love this poem! I really dig the simplicity of it. Yet, with so little words, it showed great depth.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Nothing wrong with falling. As long as there's someone there to catch you :)

[Rene Salinas]

Well I live in a place that rains and there is always mud, grey, very little "slipperiness" about. We really don't belive in the mild that's why we end up in Spain it said people there don't belive in winters.

Thank you

[The Twin Arenas]

title important part of piece, as is flow of second stanza.

[The Twin Arenas]

thanks for the read, as always.

[Rene Salinas]

I was going to eleborate on that but I decided not to go off on one... I promise next time I'll throw the kitchen sink again

[The Twin Arenas]

hahaha. ok.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Don't love the winter, is so slippery. Very well done. :) Rudi

[Baby Ricochet]

Winter's always mild here. That's why I live in Florida

[The Twin Arenas]

I'm obsessed with Florida.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it will come...harmlessly a few flurries will arrive, and then Bam...we will be falling on the ice once again.
winter will still roar before it is over.

[The Twin Arenas]

eh, thanks Jacob. I don't usually write stuff like this. I don't know why I did today, and I sort of hope I don't ever again. Kind of weak a*s s**t. It was just so slippery today. Literally, the slipperiest day of my entire life, sidewalks-wise.