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A Poem by The Twin Arenas
"

sticking

"

Don't be ashamed

to be something

that needs to be saved.


Whales

Europe

Pucks


The Union.

© 2014 The Twin Arenas


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Some countries have a collective pride that is so unshakable, even though they know deep inside they do need an extension of a hand from an external party. Simple truth!

Posted 9 Years Ago


We need saving, whether it is from outside forces(whales), internal conflicts(Europe), I am sorry but the word "puck" would always remind me of Robin Goodfellow who needs saving from his knack of messing things up...
Although, I reckon the Union(the album) needs no saving....;D


Posted 9 Years Ago


This is wonderful.
Short, with a lot of heart and a little bit of sass.

Nice!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Another wonderful piece, gets straight down to it; and very true. Thank you for sharing

Posted 9 Years Ago


So much said in so few words. Outstanding! :) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like what your saying, I might add America and Australia...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Preserve the pucks!!! A worthy cause

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really like this one.. even though it is straightforward.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is great. So simple, yet says so much. This, I very much get, and appreciate.

Posted 10 Years Ago


He wept? whipped? why is it Whales Europe Pucks The Union? you may not know as art is arbitrary but if you do it might be interesting for us to hear in this roundtable

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Twin Arenas

10 Years Ago

whales pucks Europe and the union all needed saving.
The Twin Arenas

10 Years Ago

thought this was pretty straight forward, honestly. thanks for the read.

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