With OPEN EyEs

Into the depths

Into my mind

Linked with my body and soul I call…

I call for you…

Who, or whatever you are

I don’t know if I shall slip completely into solitude…

But I know I believe in dreams

I believe so strongly in dreams

Dreams of such undeniable passion

Dreams that drive my big heart…

And as I strive farther it becomes more clear

The depth

The destruction

The demise

I see you with open eyes

I see you with guilty hands

I smile in gratitude

I believe you dream, too

Can’t you dream?

Can’t you hope?

Or have you nothing of that?

Are you a figment of illusion

Or lost in the math?

Do you believe in dreams?

Do you believe in your now?

Or are you a part of mind while I’m thinking out loud?

Reviews

[ICE]

Ah, this is very deep...and brilliant if i must say so myself. This writing I believe.... indirectly is asking something that from time to time....well all ask ourselves...."Who am I? " That which to me...is a very beautiful question. As a species we often try to look deep within ourselves and often times we don't like what we see...

"And as I strive farther it becomes more clear
The depth
The destruction
The demise
I see you with open eyes
I see you with guilty hands"

To be able to have dreams....that is amazing...
i absolutely loved this piece. Well done
~ICE

[cest la vie]

Jason,
Again another deeply written piece. The "Soul" questions asked here are ones only enlightened people coud or would consider asking. The almost begging tone just about broke my heart. I will not cite a fav line, I will say the entire write is perfect.

[Jennifer Marie Theresa ..]

So beautiful and deep. I can understand and connect with the poem-to be searching for someone to recognize you, to connect with is amazing.

[Morning Bliss]

Wow! this is so deep with a feeling of...yearning. Its as if your asking someone or something to look passed all the mathematics of life to dream. Or so I think, hehe.
I like this piece a lot! Wonderful writing, Jason! :)

[Fran Marie]

The depth

The destruction

The demise

I see you with open eyes


I love the way you use rhyme within your poems

another fine piece showing your wonderful writing skills in verse

Fran Marie

[deeps]

WOW! This is deep and so wonderful.
I like this, such wonderful talent you have penned here.

[Bud]

Another Fine and Excellent multidimensional piece of art, Jason! The depth is bottomless. Reaching out into the unknown within ones mind is a fantastic journey that has endless possibilities...dreams are just that, and dreams require believing. I believe this is a Talent at work! Keep up the Fantastic works of art, Jason! I really enjoyed this a lot.

[Anastasia Starlena]

Awesome. I like this piece. Why is it the deeper we go we find we don't embrace our flaws? I think it is because we shove everything down and then when we get to the point we have to inward inspect ourselves it becomes traumatic. But never fear the person still deep down has dreams and passion. It is just a little muddy in those waters and hard to see them. Take a look though it is there a little glimmer of something that is always a positive called hope. Great piece.

[Akina]

so great and mysterious and deep. loved it.
great flow with great words!
thanks for sharing this awsome peace!

Akina

[Voice11]

this is really great! very dark and mysterious...grayish black colors...swirling into the neverending depths of the mind...and dreams! love the flow and the wording good job!