"Subconscious Timing"

 Read the science within  

Read the highest of men

And how they’re dying from sin

Now just try this again

It’s repeated

Mistreated people following dreams

Lost between blind eyes and oblivious screams

Passed down through spoiled revelations

Leaving total complications within different nations

That’s why we’re facing

Irrelevant fascists’ passion for entrapment

To overthrow our world’s Captain Abrupt

Taught to tuck and duck

Ignorance by luck

Until you just give up

To your own beliefs

Beneath hidden inside of your eyes

A world we live in now eventually dies

We defy

Lying to ourselves and others

We still won’t carry life as existing brothers

Hidden behind rubber

Covered sheets of sin

Forgotten rotten karma we have been plotting

But not in a million years will I live in fear

I know I’m to do, and for why I am here

Confident and responsive to the highest of powers

And post their horrid plans and crash them in hours

With thoughts that are their cost

It seems only inside

Only inside of our minds

Is there something truly we are seeking to find

Left in reverse, lost

To now only be a mystery

Some questions have no answers for they are lost in history

Why, oh why are we blinded?

Backbones binded

Reaching higher, I’m flying

Or am I dying?

Free will died just as we hit the ground

Am I finding my subconscious timing?   

 

Subconscious Timing

Reviews

[Akina]

waow... I cant find the words...!
so amazing, and it got a really nice flow and rhymes :)
....waow.... great job.

Akina :)

[Anastasia Starlena]

Wow this is an intriguing piece so very true. Way to think outside the box. So many times we are tricked to believe we have rights. But we believe that because, it is easier than to believe while all our rights tend to be choked out of us. It is us who have allowed it. Great thought out piece.

[deeps]

I like this, i found it quite intriquing.
Wonderfully written and said.

[Brittany]

I really like this one, Jason.

Reminds me a bit of Vonnegut's "Slaughter-house V". A wonderful write, full of paranoia and exploitation. A brief vision of mind control and facism at its' very worst.

Keep on writing, my friend.