Unproven

It's a crazy world we live in eh?

The dropkick of the folded presidents coming up to be a simple washington

I'm lost within,

A true disgust of my trust, hoping for life's simple luck,

But my freedom's a must, boast my husky and trustworthy.. lust

For a society that is better to be hated and traded for a question laid in a shaded...

Corner of the room, Standing alone and screaming at myself in the mirror

I see things clearer when you all remain quiet.

I don't try it, Oh, the reprocussions of humanity's diet

I Kill the dust of the air within my wake of the distance...

And hang out in the actions of my own existance

Dreaming and crying in a world of confusion

One where we are all lost, and unproven.

Reviews

[cest la vie]

I read this as an in your face, bold tone piece of Spoken Word.

"A true disgust of my trust, hoping for life's simple luck,
But my freedom's a must, boast my husky and trustworthy.. lust"

When you have strong lines like this that just jump, then I know we are there. This is a great write, with a great message. Again, another outstanding piece!!

Lynne

[ICE]

This was pure enjoyment....

"The dropkick of the folded presidents
coming up to be a simple washington"

I just loved that line. You write with so much fire...so much conviction.
This was anazing....simply amazing

[Kimberly Smith]

NICE ,NICE ,NICE

[Anastasia Starlena]

Wow written with great conviction. A very good piece. Well done.