Demented

Demented World

Colonization upon our nation of slaughter

Bloody rivers, of our lost fallen fathers

Imprisonment exists, so check your neck for your collar

This is our world, and our corruption is dollars

We’re searching for the answers, but for within our wallets

Printed presidents are burning a hole in our pockets

And a little bit of weed, to unlock what’s beneath

Is only experienced through us dodging police

Clouded, powdered noses; A life only chosen

It’s parallel thorns pricking fingers on roses

Defiance of a higher; programmed, wired

Authority’s contradiction on what’s been written on squires

It’s a corruption of destruction, so hold the hand of your family

And hear the blistering, whistling, that’s truth of humanity

Corruption, destruction; The hand of your family

And the blistering whistling that’s the truth of humanity

I can’t believe, we have to see…

We have to see these dangers

Demented is me, within my dreams

As my passion angers

For the child

The anger cries…

Youth can’t arise

In a world of demented lies

Contemplating eyes, arise shelter for the homeless

Losing focus, from the interfering flying locusts

That relegate and pressure

Until more becomes lesser

And the dead shells on the ground elevate and pester

Within the mind of the dying, and only in time

Will a beaten soul arise, and re-climb

Unto the top of the subject

“The lust when you undress…

Peels the skin from the bone, exposing the loveless.”

And the stress is just a test, crazy and obsessed

Beneath fluent minds…humanity is possessed

For alcoholic causes, the ignorance fallen

Almost relevant to a life that never stops, but just pauses

Almost relevant to a mind that doesn’t think that it’s able

To shuffle the hand that’s been placed upon the table

Just dreaming up existence that seems forever missing

With nothing to show, but the cries of our children!

I can’t believe, we have to see

We have to see these dangers

Demented is me, within my dreams

As my passion angers

For the child

The anger cries…

Youth can’t arise

In a world of demented lies

Hold your golden child, it’s almost over now

Cling to your golden child, it’s almost over now

Let me give you a little bit of history

It means for one time, I need you listening

We’re living by the law of protect and serve…

Us papers. For vapors, where nothing is pure but haters

At the strong arm of the law

Jurisdiction to the system has been seen before

Repeated lies, arise self-contradiction

A groundhog day

Surreal life repetition

 Of Society!!

So many are following

We’re all just a number, another human is swallowing

In which I realize, there is not one right government system

They got a gun in your face, and their finger keeps itching…

I can’t believe, we have to see…

We have to see these dangers

Demented is me, within my dreams

As my passion angers

For the child

The anger cries…

Youth can’t arise

In a world of demented lies

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow, wow, wow.. such powerful emotions and statements.. so much that can be said of this.. and it's truth in raw form!!! Love the way it flows .. I share much of your sentiment.. people judge me thinking I am maybe off key but guess what .. the world is off key!!! Nothing is right.. I do have hope for a better day and times but I fear this is a ways away! Thank you so much for invigorating me.. going to favorites as this one fires me up!!! =)

[Miss Coral]

Raw and powerful- aggressive and true. The rhyming scheme was amazingly well done. I only saw a single typo,
"So may are following"
*many

and otherwise, great piece, very well done, excellent writing.

[hello1]

wow. that was amazing

[AbsentElements]

A lot of words but I have to say I enjoyed reading every one of them. All of the rhyming keeps you hooked, and throughout it all I had so many thoughts going through my head. A very deep write, with so much thought behind it all. Very nice write.

[Aditya Unni]

Wow

[Cool Handless Luke]

Very powerful and relevant words you write here and a very nice flow to it as well (flow is ohhh so important I think) Nice job!

[PhantomDancer]

Strong writing! But it is true what you have said. There is so much for youth of today to face, and many cannot succeed. Well done.

[nostal]

Very, very, powerful.
Great job.

[cest la vie]

Well my friend, you have done it once more.
Written a gripping, hard edged, wake-your-a*s-up piece. I LOVE THIS!!
The entire piece just flowed so well, rich with details, an outstanding piece of work.
I can hear you reading this as a raw Spoken word, thumping your chest..

Excellente', Jason!!

[Winter McPherson]

Wow! Great! The rythm of it flows and the words are so very powerful. Loved it!