Crazy In Love

Nightmares

Desires

Go away

Don’t bother coming back today

Some things are hard to say

Others I can’t keep at bay

 

Dreams

Wishes

Overflow my mind tonight

Slowly, I lose reality’s sight

Though I resist with all my might

I will surely lose this fight

 

Thoughts

Images

Contaminate my head

All the words I could’ve said

I lay uncomfortably in my bed

And dream of the lies I fed

 

Whispers

Shouts

Block out everyone’s voice around me

Unreal panic weakens my knee

I hear what I cannot see

I know the voice…and wish it would leave me be

Reviews

[Wake Up!]

its nice to have the feelings i had at one time put into words, because i never really had those. this was a piece that really hit home. well written and very true

[Brittni]

I have felt that for so long. I have been in a relationship with a good person, but I was stupid and feeding them lies about a future together. I'm a different person now after growing from that. I guess what I'm trying to say is that you're not afraid of writing from matters on the heart and that's impressive.

[Ian Faraway]

I had trouble coming up with a title for this. And I don't know if its more like guilt or just 'crazy' in general. If you come up with a title that's better than this I'll appreciate it :) And it wasn't really forced at the end, which I'm sort of surprised because I forced the first few stanzas before I got into the swing.

[Solidad]

I like the rhythm of this piece but towards the end the rhyme seems to get a little forced. The only thing I think I have qualms with is that the title seems misleading. The piece feels more like 'guilt' and less like 'love'. Though I guess depending on your definition they could be one in the same.