This Night

Something different to kick off the new year, da?

Come on, girl

Let me caress your body

Let’s lose ourselves tonight

How can something so wrong

Feel so right

 

Let’s lose control

Let our minds go

We’ll let our bodies talk

What more magical

Than watching our bodies Walsh?

 

I can’t control these feelings

I can’t deny my body from moving

Time seems frozen

The world seems blurred

Our movement is flowin’

 

This may be our only night

So we’ll play the music low

And keep our lips locked

Love so fierce

Girl, you make my world rock

Reviews

[Viki Rachel]

The flow is good, the words brilliant, the feel sensual. "Love so fierce." So true.
This poem just screams passion. Passion is a strong word, and a strong feeling. You captured it and turned it into many words.
A pleasant read. Thank you for that!

[Wake Up!]

well written, very passionate, bravo yet again!!

[Solidad]

Its one of your 'good' pieces to me.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

emotional write :) thumbs up

[GrownUpTime]

wow. really powerful. awsome write