Waiting For The End

I had some inspiration with music tonight. Enjoy.

Living at the mercy of pain and fear

Knowing I don’t have what it takes

To move on from this

 

Sitting in an empty room

Trying to forget the past

Of what made me feel like this

 

I just want to trade this life

For a new beginning

So I can be far from this

 

Now it seems I’m stuck

Waiting for the end

So I can escape from this

 

This

The pain of a one way love

This road seems to go on forever

 

Now

I’m standing on a torn road

Trying to find the end

 

I’ve had enough

Of loving you

I never did have a choice

 

It’s driving me crazy

How much I need you

Now I’m stuck with the misery

 

I look up to the sky

Like there’s something invisible there

Hoping that it will help me out

 

Now I’m lost

It’s so hard to let go

Even though this is killing me

Reviews

[Wake Up!]

well written, your poems are exceptional and im quite jealous. i cant write poetry this good, you have a gift(:

[Solidad]

"I’ve had enough
Of loving you
I never did have a choice"

This line pretty much sums it up for me. It is 'knowing' and in saying that, J'adore.

[Ian Faraway]

Debbie Downer? WTF?

[Jordan]

Debbie Downer!

[Adam :P]

like someone is still trying to letting go and looking for just something to pop out and fix everything for him, and it just doesn't show up. haha. what i got out of it.
good poem, i enjoyed reading it, kept me into the whole thing.

[Zachary_James]

Great