Man W***e

Try to forget and you turn to one thing....still doesn't work but now it's habit

I think I'm losing this time
Put this love into a Romeo & Juliet rhyme
So where should I begin?
Maybe where it was the end

You left when I was stuck in the dark
Along with a piece of my heart
Now I'm looking when I can't see
Looking for a missing part where it won't be

Smooth talk this way and that
My lie becoming more and more fat
Pour all my love and hate into it
"Hey girl, want to see my cockpit?"

I don't know who they are
But each time I'll bring along a cigar
Truth be told, I want you to knock on my door
I hate being a man w***e

Reviews

[Jazique]

Flawless, You poetry really seems to improved much with grammar and spelling. Writing was interesting. It was definitely amusing never guessing the end and unique in its own little way. Nicely done.

[Crystal]

This poem greatly amused me.

[Taylor H.]

I thought it was kind of amusing. I liked it though

[aloha.]

wow, the topic is sort of sick but i the way you describe it it isn't as bad.

[Norma M Sutton]

Interesting writing.

[Closed Account]

This is really good. Great job(:
(sorry, I know that's a horrible review, but it's true.)

[peaches]

omgg i luvv dis poem