Five Senses of a Bad LoveA Poem by Ian FarawayJust something I made when I couldn't sleepBe patient with me
I just need a little time to breath Everything is happening so fast It feels like we just won't last Quicken the pace! Slow down! Every choice is made with a frown I'm caught in the middle of it Now doubting that we are the "perfect fit" Everything isn't good enough for you I'm wrong no matter what I try to do Now it smells like love burning I'm too proud to start begging It sounds like a heart shattering into parts Having me on a leash from the start It feels like a heavy weight on my shoulder Each day, you get a bit more colder It looks like a walking natural disaster I know there is no "Happy Ever After" It tastes like a cold plate of hate All I can do now, is wait © 2010 Ian FarawayReviews
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Added on July 28, 2010Last Updated on July 29, 2010 AuthorIan FarawaySomewhere, NHAboutIan Faraway is simply a pen name and is not my actual name. Here are a few things to note: 1. If you need me to read anything you've written, please feel free to PM me. Also, let me know if you.. more..Writing
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