Happy Birthday Dad

Happy Birthday Dad

A Poem by Ian Faraway
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Here's a poem I wrote for my father for his birthday. We've been through rough times but I still love him. This poem's for him.

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Almost three years have past
And we still managed to last

I want you to know one thing
That we will be everlasting
I know life hasn't treated you well
Put yourself out there and tried to sell
Just me, you, and different girls
Life put is in a big whirl

What I did was pretty low
I saw the pain in your eyes
But you're a proud man and didn't let it show
When you're down, look towards the skies
Chances are I'm looking there
Just know I love you
And leaving home was a lot to bare
And I know it hurt you too

So happy birthday, Dad
And this is me telling you
Don't let life make you sad or mad
I love you

© 2010 Ian Faraway


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That's really, really, really good!! You should give it to your dad for his birthday. I'm POSITIVE it would touch his heart the way it touched mine. Good job!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh, this is such a sweet and sad piece! I can imagine how hard it must be to leave someone you love for so long.

100/100

Posted 14 Years Ago



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