I have been taking my writing more seriously lately and get very frustrated with 'good writing' or 'this was good' because it's basic and pretty much there... it's useless to me as a writer because it doesn't help me improve or make that piece better. So please, give some structured critiques from now on. Thank you!
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Can't wait to see what your writing is all about and I will definitely give you some structured critiques but its good to have good writings sometimes because it means you're not making us fall asleep but, I understand so prepare for some reviews.
I've only read the first two chapters, because a previous comment confused me into reading the little notes and now it makes sense. So far, so good. Interesting, horrible grammar, though seeing as this seems to be one of those "I'm writing this from my life and memories, and grammar doesn't really matter too much right now" pieces, that's...er forgivable. (not really, but I lacked a better word)
Sorry Guys! Chapter (first) and Chapter are both unpulished for now. They're two separate chapters that need to be connected so as soon as I get up to that point in my story I'll officially publish it. Sorry!
Ian Faraway is simply a pen name and is not my actual name.
Here are a few things to note:
1. If you need me to read anything you've written, please feel free to PM me. Also, let me know if you.. more..