Who You Are

A very short, simple poem about love

You are

Beautiful

Talented

Happy

The only flower in someone's dessert

You Are

Giving

Caring

Outgoing

The light in someone's darkness

You Are

Ambitious

Full of life

Smart

The sparkle in someone's eyes

You may not know it

But it's who you are

Reviews

[MsJewel]

I love this. Can I say that? Ok..yes I love it. So simple - yet so sweet. Wonderfully romantic. The perfect little love poem!

:) Julie

[Ian Faraway]

This was a sort of 'on the spot' poem that I was dared to make after a reader pointed out how dark a few can be. The flow in a lot of my poems aren't great and this one was almost cruel in that area. But, at the risk of sounding narcissistic, this poem had great meaning behind it and loved a few of the lines. Wish the way it was delivered was a bit better. Thank you for your kind words. -Faraway-

[MsJewel]

I think the flow is just fine. It's the feeling of the poem that is captivating and that in my opinion makes a great love poem. :)

[Ian Faraway]

Always get that one write. Thank you again for your insight. Made my night. If you ever need someone to review a new poem or review a poem in your archives that hasn't been reviewed as much as you'd like, just let me know through a message. My RRs are off.

[TTBoy28]

This is very cute! I like it very much!