Cloud Envy

Cloud Envy

A Poem by Ian Faraway

Carefree; high above
Floating lazily through the sky
Just going where the wind carries it
Seeming content in it's existence

It has no need to hurry
No concept of time
Or places it needs to be
It simply is and nothing more

"We're going to be late"
Snapping me out of the moment
One last glance upwards, I realize
I suffer from cloud envy

© 2016 Ian Faraway


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I liked how you indirectly attacked "dislike for responsibilities" by negatively defining men's busy lives and relating this into the personification of the cloud.

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Added on March 27, 2016
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Ian Faraway
Ian Faraway

Somewhere, NH



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