Laughter in Lies

Eyes of ice and soul of fire
Within this heart live dark desires
The book of promises becomes a book of lies
As your God forsakes all and leaves his angels to die
Any hopes of a once light, saving grace
Now turns to gray dust and a time of waste
The skies crack open beneath a cold, heartless sun
As I find my own God down the barrel of a gun
Preaching all your godly ways, along with all your optimistic ways
When in the end, you will come to see
That the last laugh really, belongs all to me

Reviews

[Cole Hayley]

A great piece. Very persoanl, or so it seems. "Gray dust" is such a vivid image.

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Thank you!

[That_Guy]

great flow and powerful content. well done

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Thanks =)

[RachelReaper]

O.M.G. Seriously, this is POWER! the rhymes fir perfectly, it sounds cool when you say it out loud and after you read it... leaves a serious lasting impression. You truly couldn't have done a better job. Excellent!

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Thank you so much!!

[Allycat]

Powerful poem, with an extremely powerful end. I really like this, and the title you choose for this piece.
"Eyes of ice and soul of fire
Within this heart live dark desires"

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Thank you! :)

[Jenna]

Holy s**t! This is powerful and definately provokes emotion... I think we may have just found our contest winner!!!