A Silent Undoing

There are no words of a self, imploding

To feel so much, to feel nothing at all

Thrashing against confines of the mind

Insidious insanity and demons of madness devour the soul

There is no way out

Engulfed by unimaginable hells

Forever filled by the howls of agony and wails of misery

Moans of suffering become endless

And pain becomes etched in every breath of life

Held against will by a sadistic power and a dark force

Invisible to the eye and unknown by many

Mind overthrown becomes the devils playground

As madness spreads like wildfire, flowing through open veins

Desire for an end, and compelled towards self-destruction

Death becomes a comfort

While absolute silence has never been so deafening

Reviews

[Kelsey]

Your way with words is amazing. You use such powerful words, such meaningful phrases. You're truly a strong writer. Once again, amazing write.

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Thank you! I truly appreciate it. I always question my writing abilities because when I share with family and friends, they only see the darkness of it all and don't look at the writing as a whole or as an art form so I never get support or positive feedback. So you're review means a lot :)

[cevance]

Very realistic description of mind's turmoil: it touches the core of someone's ongoing existence. Although it's a haunting piece, it's well executed. Nice!

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Thank you :)