FAR AWAY FROM YOU

Being away from someone you love is not a great feeling

When I'm away, far away from you
I feel sick, I don't know what to do
should I sob or maybe just cry
I feel hopeless I should just die
You are the one that always kept me going
The reason I woke every morning
without you I get weak day by day
You're my strength, how I wish you'd stay
When I go to sleep I get sleepless nights
I was already used to having you by my side
I feel so alone, so close to my fears
If I was with you you'd hold me dear
I don't know the difference between a smile and a frown
even if the sun rises I still feel down
I used to laugh and smile but that joy faded
now I cry and frown, I feel wasted
It sucks to be away, far away from you

It's a deep feeling, don't know if you feel it too

Reviews

[Secretpoet]

I feel the depth, and the feeling of separation, it has to be done, it's inevitable but has to done. They are far but still close to me and occupy me with our memories. >_

[Amani]

thanks for stopping by

[living lavender]

the depth in this piece was...painful.
i read it first as the one missing another.
then i read it as the one being missed by the other.
{both made my heart hurt.

[Amani]

A lot of pain expressed in a poem makes it less painful. That's what I tell myself everyday

[living lavender]

wow. i love that....
{almost makes it bearable. in a sense.}

[Amani]

thank you so much

[June bug]

Aw, I am so sorry, this is touching. It hurts to miss someone.
I have been there. My husband used to live 1500 miles away from me.
Now I get to see him everyday.

[Amani]

This poem made my feel close, though far from the person I love.