Too Much

If you want to leave, leave gently

It was too much
And I was unhappy
I told you to stay
But you left me already
I was full of love
But you were full of lies
I told you I'm fine
But what if I'm not?
You can't just leave me
In my saddest nights
It was too much
To handle this pain
I'm not asking you
To come back to my darkness
But I'm asking you to go
In my better days

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh wow...

the last two lines...asking you to leave in my better days.
right now i need you, tomorrow i will be okay and you can leave, because i know the "us" is a bust...
love and lies make strange bedfellows for sure.
really like where this ended up....good poem.
j.

[Wafa]

Thanks you!!!
You're so sweet!

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

This sounds sad and emotionally driven.
A broken trust that needs no more disturb.
Mind full of memories, heart lovingly hurt,
Trying to get back together and be free from love dungeon.

I felt emotionally impressed by your expression. You really penned this so well, Wafa.

[Wafa]

Thank you for saying that ♥️!

[John the Baptist]

This one has the sound of desperation. The dread of abandonment can lead us to desire even the worst of relationships. Hopefully this will work out all right.

[Wafa]

Hopefully.
Thank you.