Prologue

Zelda telling about the orgin of the Dark Realm

"About Five thousand five hundred years ago there was a group in Hyrule called the Dark Interlopers. They shunned the light and protested against almost all of Hyrule's laws. Since they were Hylian people we offered them a special set of laws for they're group but they refused so we left them alone. Joseph Freeder was the leader of the group at the time they broke away from Hyrule. They said he was so obsessed with breaking away from Hyrule that he had a dream where 3 goddesses came to him and told him to throw his eldest daughter in a well with red water so he did. When she came out she a monster but she apprently split into the three goddesses. The goddesses were short and they all had red eyes, black hair and skin the color of ash...

Oceana was the calmest of the three. Her element was water. She had webbed feet and hands, gills, and small fins on her arms and legs.

Eartha was very couragous and she would stand up for anything. She was one with Earth we walk on. She could talk to animals and grow plants in a second. She wore a green veil on her head, a ripped shirt and pants, and no shoes

Electra was the most power hungry. She was a pyromaniac and worshiped lightning. There was something yery diffrent about her though she had a black line that litterally looked like it split her head in half. There was a reason for this. The right side of her body resembled that of a male and the left a female. Her right side was almost completly black and had an odd design all mover that was a turquoise color. Because of this she could transform into a male she called Fire.

Fire was exactally like Electra except instead of having part of a body like a male and the other like a female the right half his body was an ash color with the black pigmentations in various areas. His face on the right side resembled that of a normal member of the Twili but of the left it looked of that of Hylian or if you trouble picturing that just picture King Zant except with two bright orange eyes instead of a red one and a brown one.

Together they combined they're powers to bring up the Dark Triforce. When they did all members of the Interlopers gathered and just like that they were gone. The only link between the two worlds was a bridge that those geniuses made out of glass"

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems

Reviews

[Ryan]

I love Zelda games ^^ this is good so far, but it seems a little rushed...otherwise, great start.

[H]

You're off to a good start. This needs a lot of work, with or without grammar problems.