EscapeA Chapter by Vouren The pain was excruciating. Lemine’s
legs felt like they were on fire. His legs collapsed and he fell into the
nearby hallway wall. He had been fighting his way back into the chamber Faro
had been trapped in. Deep within his mind he knew it was hopeless, but he had
to keep trying. Anything that had been inside that room would have been crushed
under the weight of the temples ceiling. But he had to keep trying. “Who the hell was that?” The face
of that man was burned into his mind. Black eyes. Lemine doubted he would ever
be able to forget it. This temple had been designed to keep him trapped inside
its walls, but it did little to stop his escape. It felt so strange, having his
fire pulled out of his control. In his years as a thief it’s never happened
before. It goes against all teachings of elemental shifting. A loud crack brought the thief
back out of his thoughts. With the limited light inside the tunnel he couldn’t
make out what the noise was. Crack.
There it was again. What was that? Then a third time. His heart began to beat
faster. Removing one of his gloves he reached towards the spot he had heard the
sounds and slid it across the wall. A large crack in the stone walls was
all he needed to feel. A chunk of stone fell to the floor and Lemine ran.
Sounds echoed through the dark hallway with a deafening brilliance. Each snap confirmed his fear. The shock to
the temple and the collapsing center had caused the entire building to become
unstable. Faro would never be rescued. If he didn’t escape now, he would join
her and it wasn’t his time yet. The distance from the entrance to
the center of the prison had taken them an hour to trek. He didn’t know how long it took to get in, but
he knew if the building continued to crumble it would only take minutes to come
down. In the darkness it would be much more dangerous while running, especially
when he reached the stairs they had climbed when they first arrived. One miss
placed step and he would fall down thousands of stairs. He had to be careful. Loud snaps and pops echoed from the walls and floors. The process was
beginning to speed up. From behind Lemine could hear the stone ceiling of the
hallway beginning to collapse. Moving into a full sprint he was forced to
ignore the burning in his legs and lungs. The stairs he had come up on his way
in came into sight. Throwing caution aside he began skipping multiple stairs at
a time, fighting to keep a good pace. Dust had begun rolling across the floor
from the collapsing structure. It hadn’t begun falling freely yet, but it
wouldn’t be long before the sheer weight of the building brought the roof down. As it began weakening larger
pieces and soon the floor was beginning to give. The vibrations were shaking
his legs, causing him to stumble into the walls. Faro had always warned him
that he needed to work on running but he never bothered to listen. He wouldn't
have much longer before the structure gave way entirely. With a deep effort
Lemine pushed his pain aside and kept sprinting. The pathway flattened as the winded
thief reached the bottom of the steps. When he had entered the temple the
stairs seemed to be needlessly deep within the structure. Now they were a sign
that the exit was close and escape possible. Light was beginning to fill hallway
as the entrance grew closer. Part of the ceiling hit the floor
ahead of Lamine, forcing him to leap over the rubble. Part of the archway near
the front of the temple had collapsed. With no place to run he stopped and fell
to his knees, fists pounding against the solid stone. All the effort, all the
pain, brought him within feet of freedom. Tears rolled down his cheeks as he
tried to catch his breath. Deep cramps were already beginning to set and
locking his legs uncomfortably in place. Exerting himself for such a long time
had brought so much pain. The tears pattered on the floor quietly. Placing his
hand on the collapsed archway he sobbed silently. Within the depths of his mind he
could feel the heavy burning of a nearby fire. His eyes snapped open. If there
was a fire nearby than there was still a chance. Focusing on that flame Lemine
sent his will out to it. Fire would listen to an elementalist like him… he just
needed to reach it. Reaching further and further through the cold night air he
finally found it. The sudden warmth made him feel like he was alive again. As
his energies mixed he took control of the campfire. The building had temporarily
stopped collapsing, and Lemine thought of a plan that might get him out alive
if he was fast enough. Forcing his mind to relax he concentrated on the fires
burning brightly outside. Under normal circumstances Lemine had problems making
flames listen to him. But this was hardly normal circumstances. Stress and
distractions would make controlling his gift much harder. There was no choice,
either do it or die. Most flame elementalists considered
the awkward man to be no more than a disgrace. The nation of Fatir was proud of
their shifting prowess and most of its citizens laughed openly at such weak
elementalists, such as himself. Only a year earlier Lemine had suffered his
last insult from his fellow countrymen during a duel with a child. This had
hastened his fleeing from his homeland. The disgrace might not have been so
severe if the child hadn't been seven, or female. At nearly twenty it should
have been no contest, but the young royals publicly humiliated Lemine for the
loss. Not even an hours later he had packed a his few worthwhile possessions
and began his journey to start a new life. His will finally took control of
the fire and he began pulling it closer to him. As it struck the outside wall he
searched, using the flames to feel the stone. Finding small cracks he focused the
fire into the small area, burning away a small hole in the wall. Smoke filled
the enclosed hallway as the fire burned closer. Cracks spread through the stone
face and began crumbling away. Grabbing a piece of the floor that
had fallen besides him he waited. When it was weak enough to break he got ready.
To build courage Lemine decided to count form ten to one. Once he reached one the
stone was thrown through the weak wall, breaking it apart. Without any support,
the ceiling began collapsing. Lemine through himself from the temple and landed
in the cold Duzee air. The chill of the night air stung his face but he
didn't mind. Cold dew dampened his clothes and chilled the back of his neck. It
had never felt so good to be cold before. A grunt of pain left his throat as he
pushed himself onto his elbows. A sly smile crossed his lips. It was a wonder
that he survived the event. Lying on his back he watched the stars twinkle
overhead. In that moment he didn’t even care that soldiers would be closing in
on him shortly. Nobody was supposed to be inside of the temple, or prison, and
now that it had collapsed they were sure to arrest him. It wouldn’t be the
first time he had been arrested, just the first in this country. Duzee wasn’t a
harsh country when it came to punishing criminals… until you got to capital
crimes. Those were punished especially harshly. He assumed that collapsing a
several thousand-year-old temple wouldn’t be looked at fondly. Wind blew a strange metallic smell to his nose as he laid on the ground
considering his fate. Even though he had no strength left he managed to rise
onto his knees. Littering the ground around him was the bodies of the soldiers
who had been guarding the temple. Nobody was left alive. Falling to his back
again he watched the stars glittering peacefully in the sky. It was so
beautiful and strangely out of place among the slain, fallen bodies of the
guard. Now Lemine could hear them. Soldiers
rushing closer to him. The gates to the valley were a good distance away and it
would have taken them a considerable amount of time to reach him. Lemine had
not realized how long he had been laying there staring at the stars, but it
felt like an eternity. As the men approached he made no
attempt to resist. Muscular arms picked him up and dragged him through the
countless lines of men. When they had finally dropped him to his knees he
realized someone was standing in front of him. With more effort than it should
have taken Lemine looked up at the man. He had never personally met the tall
thin man in front of him before, but he knew who It was. His long black hair
flowed gracefully over thin shoulders. He almost looked feminine but his eyes
where sharp, and unkind. A long white and green coat protected him from the
cold Duzee air as it snapped against his calves in the wind.
Those silver eyes looked back into
his and in that moment something became clear to the simple thief. Whatever
Faro and he had released from the Temple of Six was important enough of a threat
that one of the six elemental emperors had come deal with it. © 2016 Vouren |
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Added on January 21, 2013 Last Updated on November 2, 2016 AuthorVourenNHAboutFirst and foremost I love to write, that is why I'm here. Everything I work on falls into a single universe created called The Last Stand. Along with my writing i also dab into drawing (and I mea.. more..Writing
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