Character Description: The Thief

Say hello to the Thief character. This is a sample of a character for a game that I am developing. I hope that you will be able to paint a clear picture in your head after reading this.

He moves swiftly and silently; a true shadow among the crowd. When you have misplaced your coins and jewels  you know he has struck. By the time the guards are alerted, he is already gone. He is no honorable knight, nor a sinister caster. This man only wishes to fatten his pouch. He is the Thief.

                

The Thief trades heavy armor for mobility. He exhibits a brown leather tunic, held by blue lace. A matching set of brown slacks and a pair of dark leather skinned boots also accompanies him. No stranger to combat the thief houses a short sword on his hip. He also wields a curved dagger, which he straps to his left shoulder. A navy blue cloak and hood completes his outfit. When the Thief is not concealing his presence from the world, one would be greeted by his iconic smile.

                

Proud of his abilities the Thief carries an aura of confidence, which can easily be mistaken for arrogance. He is in the prime of his youth and often catches the eyes of maidens in waiting. His rustic gaze is only complemented by his chocolate colored hair. His hair is short but he carries three braids, which falls to his shoulders. His ivory skin remains unscathed free of any scars. Able to maneuver in ways others find impossible, his slender body is idea for his craft.

                

Unlike the other treasure hunters the Thief  only wishes to line his pockets with riches. As the Thief would say, "Money makes the world go round and the world is still turning."  

Author's Note

As usual I am always accepting comments and feedback. Enjoy

Reviews

[Debbie Stevens]

Detailed description. Would be a good main character for a story. I can picture all types of adventure and trouble he would create.

[Brandon Adams]

Thank you for taking the time to read this piece. It's awesome to hear that the Thief is worthy of being a main character.