A Note to Time.

Dear Time

Am Mesmerized by that very Scent

The Very sight

Please Still this moment

So that I will never forget

So that I will always remember this Feeling

So that all the worries in this world will be null

Perhaps a Mental Photograph will help me

No!

Please grant my Final Request

Let me rest here

With my body against her’s

Reviews

[mick weller]

Very well observed ...
yes, some moments seem to pierce the space-time continuum and remain forever fresh ...
only to release joy or/and sadness when they reemerge ...
if you feel as though `lit up like a Christmas tree` - you may never sense it again and so yes ...
just leave me be - here I'll stay
great - thought provoking piece
nice write

[Angelic Darkness]

I think we all wish for time to still. I have to admit, that at the
last stanza, it just didn't feel like it was the end, like words were missing.
Maybe, its how you wanted it to sound, maybe, not. It is a good poem,
wrote with a lot of feeling. AD