TO A POET I KNOW

TO A POET I KNOW

A Poem by Vol

When we talk shop and

turn ourselves inside out,

something with no name

happens that is not macro,

not quantum. It is a thing

that knows there is more

than matter in the universe,

a conscious everything whose

strings hold it all together.


Maybe there is more to this

love thing than we know,

more than we can define.

The quantum people say

the universe just might be

conscious, and that would

mean God, and the unified

theory of everything…


God is love, and whoever

abides in love abides in God,

and God abides in them.”

We are entangled, and just

now figuring it out.

© 2025 Vol


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I question our very existence on a day basis. When asked if l believe in 👽 aliens, my pat answer is "If we can be here they can be there" which only stands to reason. A line (not verbatim) from the movie, Contact; If we are the only ones in this vast universe what a waste of space.
Now if we believe we were created from dust caused by the big bang who's to say that a God/Creator wasn't also created from some special dust that evolved eons faster than us, or had a master plan for Earth. At the same time hundreds, even thousands of other God's were created to oversee the billions of other planets in other solar systems, that can sustain life.
Mankind only came into the "modern era" 100/200 years ago. And even still, other tribes were still living in mud houses while a majority had become enlightened. What if other planets or solar systems had a 1000year headstart on us.
Yet here we are, stuck to the side of a giant rotating ball of dirt writing poetry.
I liked your alot.

Trace

Posted 1 Month Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Vol

1 Month Ago

Aw, thank you for saying, but I'm just a throwback to when it was cool to think, and intellectuals w.. read more
INIQUITY

4 Weeks Ago

@Vol. Braces. Thanks though. THIS NEW PIC? (Check out my "Belly Piercing!" Mom is going to Flip OUT!.. read more
Vol

4 Weeks Ago

Hmmm... ? I haven't seen any pics...
Dang... gotta go for now... Later.



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Love this such a debatable topic. The alchemy of love is really made from chemicals released in the brain which give that euphoric fantastic love feeling but cannot be maintained. As for God and religion they are almost outdated with the progress of science and brilliant minds like Stephen Hawkins. Back in the day people had no idea of DNA,atoms, molecules etc microwaves, mobile phones how the universe worked. We do now. A lot of ignorance back then where people needed to believe to give them hope on a better life and or to be guided. As a kid we were told there is a God and that we should believe in God. We were also told of tooth fairies and Santa Klaus and that we would meet grandma in heaven one day, all untrue. Should have been told we were made of atoms and molecules the same as the universe. Would we still believe in God if it wasn’t instilled into us on heresay. I certainly haven’t seen God nor has he answered my prays when I was young. As I say back in the day science was unheard of so religion and God could be so convincing and people were gullible. When the gypsies came to town selling bottles of a special elixir which would cure coughs, make you younger, stronger etc etc people bought them bottles in the hope and believed the gibberish spoken about the product when it was only tap water. That was the mentality of people back then. But people still have their beliefs and Gods today because they can’t accept the truth because it would invariably shatter their beliefs . Great work Vol.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


WOW!!!! YOU'VE BEEN BUSY, VOL! I absolutely am blown away by your last answer to Trace! To me, that compares to our taking a handful of sand and saying because we can count the grains, we are GOD. But, NO! GOD has ENDLESS BEACHES AND PLANETS AND UNIVERSES! I researched and discovered we think there are SEVEN UNIVERSES. Do you believe that, Vol?
ANYHOO, gotta clean up the entire house as part of my punishment (Like THAT'S gonna hurt??...LOL..see ya!) Smooches!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

well penned acknowledgement of how science and faith are intertwined within us.

very enjoyable read Vol

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

4 Weeks Ago

Thanks, man... Tis true.
Wouldn't it be kinda ironic if it turns out that the universe is alive and we are all somehow connect through invisible strings that are only truly ever felt when we are in love and that has been the answer all along?
That only the calmness and security of love can tune us into its very own existence would leave us all thinking "it was right there in front of us the whole time!
I only hope they don't rewrite the ending to Hitchhikers guide to the galaxy, or even worse, remake the movie without the talents of Alan Rickman owning that film!
It doesn't even bear thinking about!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

1 Month Ago

Lorry,
Welcome to THE IRONIC AGE! I guess, my question is if maybe all those things we call .. read more
I question our very existence on a day basis. When asked if l believe in 👽 aliens, my pat answer is "If we can be here they can be there" which only stands to reason. A line (not verbatim) from the movie, Contact; If we are the only ones in this vast universe what a waste of space.
Now if we believe we were created from dust caused by the big bang who's to say that a God/Creator wasn't also created from some special dust that evolved eons faster than us, or had a master plan for Earth. At the same time hundreds, even thousands of other God's were created to oversee the billions of other planets in other solar systems, that can sustain life.
Mankind only came into the "modern era" 100/200 years ago. And even still, other tribes were still living in mud houses while a majority had become enlightened. What if other planets or solar systems had a 1000year headstart on us.
Yet here we are, stuck to the side of a giant rotating ball of dirt writing poetry.
I liked your alot.

Trace

Posted 1 Month Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Vol

1 Month Ago

Aw, thank you for saying, but I'm just a throwback to when it was cool to think, and intellectuals w.. read more
INIQUITY

4 Weeks Ago

@Vol. Braces. Thanks though. THIS NEW PIC? (Check out my "Belly Piercing!" Mom is going to Flip OUT!.. read more
Vol

4 Weeks Ago

Hmmm... ? I haven't seen any pics...
Dang... gotta go for now... Later.
There is no fear in love; perfect love casteth out fear.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

1 Month Ago

John,
But, oh is it dangerous! Half the love poems no matter how famous seem to examine the p.. read more
Very thought provoking and well written.
I also believe the universe is conscious. If we call that "God" so be it. One can believe in an omnipotent and omniscient force in our universe....I call it "love" or "nature".
In spite of my beliefs, I still pay my bills. 😂

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

1 Month Ago

nj,
Yes. There is that bit about freezing to death because the gas bill was so inconvenient. .. read more
nj coleman

1 Month Ago

Like how an ant is unaware of our existence?
You may have something there. It is incredible .. read more
and we really want something of a higher nature to believe in....but on and off things happen in this life that make us question?
So religion can be an open question....does he exist or not?
I believe he does....an all kind and forgiving spirit...
But I have been entangled in the question since I started college in 1968.,.....

either an old believer or an old questioner?
This poem made me take another look at my own theories and feelings.
j.



Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

1 Month Ago

j.
We are evidently about the same age, and came to ourselves in the late sixties when EVERYT.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

No, please, Vol.
Carry on...I like these chats and I agree with you, expecially about the bil.. read more
Vol

4 Weeks Ago

Amen! Good talk of deeper things is always rewarding...
This is brave and clever! I need to repost this...
Sir, once a guy told me that we are all parts of God and he gave two of us the biggest heart, so if we became a couple the world will be full of love...
I think this is the sweetest.
Till
He changed.
So I wrote a stanza "I can only endure God's uncertainty" and my circle thought this was about 'I can't play hot and cold, or just be clear with me' but it was about; if we created the love, we are the gods of love, and I could've endure that.

Your poem is very well written, and creative.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

1 Month Ago

Beren,
If the Universe is truly conscious as the quantum physicists are beginning to realize .. read more
Beren

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for taking time to tell me about your thoughts!! I appreciate it! Have a great wee.. read more
You know when I saw the report that the scientists believe the Universe is conscious I thought hmm they are just now finding God is truly alive.

We’ve had this discussion before but I have alway thought of God as and energy being that most think of like the universe or karma, around us in energy waves all the time.

This is so well put and thought out. god definitely is love.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

1 Month Ago

PB,
Hello, my friend! The very concept of an aware God in a Universe so vast that we have no .. read more

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My name is Vol Lindsey. I live in Gouge Eye, Texas, a tiny ghost town on Rt. 66. I am a retired creative writing, English literature teacher. I have been writing poetry and reading publicly since 196.. more..

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