TO A POET I KNOW

When we talk shop and

turn ourselves inside out,

something with no name

happens that is not macro,

not quantum. It is a thing

that knows there is more

than matter in the universe,

a conscious everything whose

strings hold it all together.

Maybe there is more to this

“love” thing than we know,

more than we can define.

The quantum people say

the universe just might be

conscious, and that would

mean God, and the unified

theory of everything…

“God is love, and whoever

abides in love abides in God,

and God abides in them.”

We are entangled, and just

now figuring it out.

Reviews

[berenongur]

This is brave and clever! I need to repost this...
Sir, once a guy told me that we are all parts of God and he gave two of us the biggest heart, so if we became a couple the world will be full of love...
I think this is the sweetest.
Till
He changed.
So I wrote a stanza "I can only endure God's uncertainty" and my circle thought this was about 'I can't play hot and cold, or just be clear with me' but it was about; if we created the love, we are the gods of love, and I could've endure that.

Your poem is very well written, and creative.

[Poetic Beauty]

You know when I saw the report that the scientists believe the Universe is conscious I thought hmm they are just now finding God is truly alive.

We’ve had this discussion before but I have alway thought of God as and energy being that most think of like the universe or karma, around us in energy waves all the time.

This is so well put and thought out. god definitely is love.

[GlendaK]

Oh, that is just so sweet!

Good for you that you are man enough to show your feelings!

[ceecee]

Wow! A real life Online Love story? Vol?

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful and poignant. Great work.

[Vol]

Thank you, man...