WAIT JUST A SEC!

WAIT JUST A SEC!

A Poem by Vol

TIME

past present future

    TICK~TOCK


NON-LINEAR TIME

Everything happens at once

TICK~


FEBRUARY TIME

Nothing ever happens

~TOCK


QUANTUM TIME

Everything is happening

(maybe, maybe not)

NOW!

TICKING~TOCKING


NO TIME

Between

entangled particles

no matter the distance.

HMMMMM


ROLEX TIME

Entangled particles

Entangled events

Entangled you and me

SNICK~CLICK


ETERNITY

Your kiss~my lips

A

FOREVER NOW

OHMMM

© 2024 Vol


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Quantum poetry. What a concept. Or series of concepts. I would say more of a superb conceit.
Miles Davis said ." Time insn't the main thing. Its the only thing."
Someone else said "Time flies like an arrow. Fruit flies like a banana"
Now a love poem on time to a quantum level. Wow and I never use that expletive.



Posted 3 Hours Ago


Well Vol, I was going to pull you up on your one omittence, but then thought you had come over all politically correct and refrained from mentioning Women time, that is somehow set at 45 minutes late for everything, with the red faced guy in tow, apologising profusely and holding his hands up in shame and defeat! 😃



Posted 21 Hours Ago


this speaks perfectly to my crazed and deprived heart.
time is merely a myth and the forever now must be suspended in time, in space.
great work. - mabel

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

1 Day Ago

Mable,
Time is a crazy study... You know, the Biblical concept of it is cutting edge... The t.. read more
Damn, and here I thought the forever now was God.

Posted 1 Day Ago



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Added on November 19, 2024
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Vol
Vol

Gouge Eye, TX



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My name is Vol Lindsey. I live in Gouge Eye, Texas, a tiny ghost town on Rt. 66. I am a retired creative writing, English literature teacher. I have been writing poetry and reading publicly since 196.. more..

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