SLAP

The first slap of love

is a heartbreaker,

but then,

so is the last.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Said with such brevity. You pack a punch here, dear Vol. Yes, it certainly feels like that and I nursed the sting for what felt like an eternity.

[Vol]

Divya,
Oh sweetheart... it is a good thing I am not allergic to stings... I'd take all of them again, though, walk away richer, and better for them.
Vol

[Betty Hermelee]

Love can be a heartbreaker whenever the slap comes…it stings our soul and leaves us in a dark place… so no matter which slap it is still burns for a long time…..a short but very meaningful play on words
Warmly, B

[jacob erin-cilberto]

both hurt the heart's cheek...
this has wonderful double meaning.
j.

[Vol]

And the pain is slow to subside...

[Poetic Beauty]

I would definitely have to agree to both. Love can be a heartbreaker.

[Vol]

PB,
Keats,
"La Belle Dame Sans Merci."
Love doesn't have teeth, she has fangs... her venom sweet.
Vol

[Poetic Beauty]

Well some of us ladies and some gentlemen do bite lmao I particularly enjoy both biting and being bitten but oh I regress.

Love is not for the faint of heart or fragile spirit. It swoops in like a hawk after prey and we are taken away without realization. Then dropped from the clouds when it has ended either in relationship or earthly. Neither are easy!!

[Vol]

Ha! That's funny! We have so much in common, I enjoy all the nibbling I can give, or get, as well... All poets do...
Vol

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you found the seriousness and humor in this as well

[Vol]

PB,
When you put serious and humor under the same sheets, beauty happens...
Vol

[Poetic Beauty]

I would have to agree very much so.