October 1st

October 1st

A Poem by JT Godin
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5/6/5

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Daybreak brews beyond
Overcast lies, beneath the
Cloudless Jovian skies.

© 2017 JT Godin


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A punch with imagery, how divine, well done, good read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a cleverly laid visual! Not quite a senyru but, perhaps has another form?

'Daybreak brews.. ' Yes!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JT Godin

5 Years Ago

Definitely more in the spirit of senryu, but with haiku inspired form/delivery.
emmajoy

5 Years Ago

As many would tell, I can only just pen prose verse! However, do beautiful need a niche sub-heading.. read more
Beautiful simple words,paints nice images in the mind with each word;-]

Posted 6 Years Ago
Great way to record the day in this short but impact-full write.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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 Added on October 2, 2017
Last Updated on October 2, 2017
Tags: Haiku, weather, sky, Jupiter, astronomy, cosmos

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JT Godin
JT Godin

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada



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I write science fiction and poetry. I like to write about how modern society interacts or is affected by rapidly changing technologies. I also have a pet interest in languages, their histories, featur.. more..

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