Piscean

yes im a pisces and i love it lol <3 :)

Piscean

                    

She is selfless and gentle, full of

               dreams and secrets. She is a natural

                     healer caught in an internal struggle

                                easily molded by the world and

                   people around her. Though her

  tender side always peaks through

                                she can’t be broken and her spirit

                             cannot ever be shattered. She always

                       seems so strong, but her luminous

                       eyes reveal a delicate somewhat

                            fragile nature. She places great

                                weight on emotions, feeling her own

                                      burdens as well as those around her.

her intuitive almost psychic abilities

       to understand others and see what

              lies ahead leaves those who meet her

       speechless. So many great qualities

                                     lurk inside her but she refuses to

                                          flaunt them. Her goal on earth is to

                                    help others and nothing could ever

     keep her away. Some believe she was

                            reincarnated from an angel, but like

                             all she has a dark side. She is a

                              creature of mystery and even with

                                 these qualities she cannot be

                                    defined. All we can say for sure

                                         Is…she is a Pisces.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[shirley gtahek]

This is a beautifully written piece. I am overlowed wiht apeechlessness for the words won't come to describe how I feel when I read it. I am happy the writer is so talented at such a yuong age and can't wait to see the future works of the very tallented writer with such hope in her words. I see beauty and that works for me.

[Georgia Gypsy]

I identify with this totally! I am also a pisces...with a dark side...
Well done! I really love it!

[TeenRomance]

Awesome :-) I love how the poem looks, and what it says.

[Voice11]

hay! I love this!! I am a piscean too! I especially love the ending about the dark side...oh..there was something my friend wrote, that I think you would like, I will mail you it if I find it!

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

beautiful poem. my sun is in "Leo" but my moon is in pisces, so i def have piscean traits. don't forget that pisces are also VERY creative and artistic, and very deep thinkers. prob why you are so much like that. i also love your fish images, and the different blue fonts you used. very asthetically pleasing. thanks for sharing.

kena

[Sheila Kline]

WOW....I am blown away by your write...very well done, and certainly "right on" for a Pisces. Your write will be very hard to top for your contest!
Excellent!!

[Akina]

waow, great written, so beautiful! you have done it so amazing :)
great job.
Thanks for sharing

Akina :)