A Woman's 7 Sins

The 7 sins with a woman�s twist on them. You will have a great laugh :)

 

A Woman’s 7 Sins

 

I watched him from across the room

Wanting him to hold me tight

To kiss my lips and caress my breasts

As we make love all night

                             

If lust is a sin

Then I am a sinner

Don’t tempt me I’m weak

I will give in

 

It’s that time of month

Pass the chocolate and the wine

Don’t you touch that candy

All of it is mine

 

If gluttony is a sin

Then I am a sinner

Don’t tempt me I’m weak

I will give in

 

I know she wants that blouse

I can see it in her eyes

But I won’t let her have it

Even though it’s not my size

 

If greed is a sin

Then I am a sinner

Don’t tempt me I’m weak

I will give in

 

I called myself off work today

I won’t get out of bed

Lounging around and watching TV

Is what I’ll do instead

 

If sloth is a sin

Then I am a sinner

Don’t tempt me I’m weak

I will give in

 

B***h, you stole my boyfriend

You are gonna die

Don’t let me see those tears

It won’t help any if you cry

 

If wrath is a sin

Then I am a sinner

Don’t temp me I’m weak

I will kill you!!!

 

God I love the way she walks

And look at that round a*s

Those are buns of steel

Maybe even brass

 

If envy is a sin

Then I am a sinner

Don’t tempt me I’m weak

I will give in

 

I’ve lost ten pounds

My guy is fine

His ex-girlfriend is dead

And I’ve got my wine

 

If pride is a sin

Then I am sinner

And I’m so happy

I gave in

Reviews

[Akash]

Its a magnificent piece...
very well described and your style is simply enticing!!!

[Flow~]

Most people try to deny they do any of those sins so i love that you have embraced them. This one made me smile it had a nice read to it. I like the poetic tone of this one. Nice write~

[courtney]

i dont know alot about poetry some i'm not gonna sit here and say its the best or its the worst poem in the world becuase of this or that. However i do know when i like or dislike something and i really enjoyed this poem it has style and it enthralls the reader so good job.

[lastchildborn]

Women same as men have there temptations it is the real world.

[Liza]

very entertaining! enjoyed! great piece!

[Mia Fin]

Haha! This is perfect! I love it! Awesome job!!

[Dreams In Color]

very interesting! I liked it very much! I'll read more tomorrow. I just realized the clock jumped ahead.

[poemprincess]

This is awesome I love it!

[Pj]

Wow this was terrific! Loved the repetition and the way you portrayed each 'sin'... really great!

[Areya Valena]

I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS!!!

This is great, and dang, I can really relate to this all.