Battlefield Of My Heart (Poetical Story)

Just read it. :)

Blood. Blood everywhere. In the mud. In the rooftops. Raining from the sky. In the flower, in it's beautiful bud.

Life? What is life? Life does not exist. Life is an endless battle full of guns and knives. Life is a endless trudge of strife.

Happiness. A lie. A lie told to you so you wouldn't ask why. Why is there pain? The only way to feel happiness is to die.

The heart. What is the heart? An empty blood vessel, devoid of life. An open war zone. Bitter and as hurtful as things that are tart.

Why must we fight? Can't you see who's right? How hard is it to stick to one ruler? To have one god over your heart? If you need it, we have a light. We can show you your path.

Your path. The path away from wrath. The path that is understaffed. The path that laughed. The path of the aftermath. The path of the daft. The path of the raft. Which will you choose?

To choose. To choose, is it to lose? To agree? To refuse? You must choose a god to rule over your life. Is it that hard? There is only one that is true among so many false. Why not choose? Why not Him? Why not together fuse?

To end this fight. To restore the peace, the prosperity, the light. To remove away the death, to replace it with life. To kill the night. To see the One and Only, a truly remarkable sight. To remove from your soul the darkness's control and blight. To be with Him tight. To end this war. To revive. To live a new life. To live at all. Only one path is right.

Author's Note

The paths are metaphors. See if you can figure out what they are for. Otherwise, just tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Moonlight]

It is amazing! So many beautifully raised thought provoking questions mark your piece. Great job! Thanks for sharing! :)

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, I'm glad you liked it, that's the same kind of reaction I keep getting from people, I have trouble believing it's that good, anyays... thx. :)) And no problem, I'll keep sharing with you if you want.

[Moonlight]

Sure thanks a lot! :)

[The StoryTeller]

No problem, would you prefer me to just send read requests? Or did you just want to read as you go?

[Moonlight]

Just send me the read requests.... :)

[The StoryTeller]

For all of them???? Okay.... XD

[The StoryTeller]

There, I sent you a read request for every article of mine except for this one.... I feel kind of bad about it...

[Moonlight]

hahaha!! I just saw... I hae officially got 55 read requests!!! God, how am I ever going to catch up to them..!!! :P :)

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, I dunno, but I thought you were insane for asking read request for all my work.... plus it took forever... :p I wish there was a "send all" button. XD Anyways, you sure that was okay with you?

[Moonlight]

I was kind of hoping you would send them in moderation ..lol! It is alright though. I will jyst respond in moderation.... :P

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, yeah, I thought you meant like all at once, so I was kind of feeling bad about sending so many... but the past is past, and we have a plan now so XD Just read them at your own pace, whenever you want. No hurry, and you don't have to read them if you don't want.

[Moonlight]

Dont be like that! I asked for then cuz I wanted to read then. Just relax, sit back and enjoy the reciews I send as time fliwd by... :P

[Moonlight]

I meant flows by...

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, I understood, and okay. :p

[iNSOMniAC]

OHHHHH MAH GOODNESS, THOSE METAPHORS.
*Flops up and down the sidewalk fangirlishly*
Very true - I like the message in this piece.

Suggestions:

"Life is a endless trudge of strife." - "Life is an endless trudge of strife."

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, fangirlishly? I assume that means fan-girl-like? And lol, why would you do that? Not like I'm One Direction or anything. I'm glad you liked it. :D

[iNSOMniAC]

*Shivers* You mean One Disease? I'm not like most teenage girls - I get my joy from hidden messages and brilliant comparisons. I don't need some girl-thirsty guy to "sing about me" on the radio to make me feel like I'm wanted.

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, One Disease. Okay, so I guess not like that, but still? xD That's still sort of the same, just over what you said and over a writer that you feel is amazing (wow, did I really just say that? XD)

[iNSOMniAC]

xDD I guess so. Words have stereotypes - "tomboy?" She acts like a dude all of the time and shouldn't be called a female. What? No. That's not it. "Fan-girl?" She crazes over four clones of a teenage guy with no life. Eh, no. The thing is, every word has a different definition to different people, and we blind ourselves to the truth because of it. Sorry... it reminded me of my book, so I just had to type out my theory. :P

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, four clones, and no problem. But, just so I'm clear, how do you presume fan-girl to mean truly, and are you mine? XD XD XD

[iNSOMniAC]

I don't know, to be honest. My definition of that word is different from yours. By declining the fact that your definition is wrong, I am disrupting the balance in this world. So if people call me bad, I agree. If people call me good, I agree. (I agree verbally - I don't honestly feel that way about myself, but their definition is different from mine, so I must mean something to them)
* What do you mean? x3

[The StoryTeller]

lol, that was so complex... and you shouldn't think you're bad.
*I was asking by your definition, are you my fan girl? XD

[iNSOMniAC]

But I do. It's... it's just the way I am.
* Oh. xDD Yeah, I suppose so.

[The StoryTeller]

Don't ever resolve to pull YOURSELF, EVER, EVER, so low that you think that bad is the way YOU are. DON"T DO THAT.

On the other note, :D

[iNSOMniAC]

Why not? You do it.

[The StoryTeller]

That's kind of a low blow, but I know. I know that I do it, and that's something I'm trying to change, because I no longer want to feel low... I no longer want to hate myself. So do it with me. Besides, one of the reasons I don't want you to do it is because from experience I know how terrible it is.

[iNSOMniAC]

If... if you makes you happy, then I'll try...

[The StoryTeller]

Okay, then I will hold you to that. If I see you being down....

[iNSOMniAC]

Most of the time I hide everything with a smile. You don't have to worry about me being glum.

[The StoryTeller]

That's not the point of what we're doing. We're being happy and positive, the opposite of what? Oh yeah! Glum! :P And you don't need to hide from me. I'm here for you, no matter what.

[iNSOMniAC]

If I don't hide, I can end up hurting everyone around me...

[The StoryTeller]

Yes, but you can also end up not doing that and being happy. Isn't it worth the risk? Besides, even if you don't do it around everyone else, can't you at least not hide around me? Please?

[iNSOMniAC]

I...
I do trust you... but could you define the word "trust" for me, please? What do YOU think it means?

[The StoryTeller]

To believe that someone loves you and has your back through everything and anything. No matter good or bad, catastrophic or barely any problem. Whether with a dark past or a light past. Whether hurting or not. Trust is caring about someone and believing that they care about you and that they'll be there for you forever, NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS. Unconditional love.

[iNSOMniAC]

Then it's settled. I trust you.

[The StoryTeller]

I'm glad, and I trust you too. Maybe now you'll start to somewhat listen to my advice?

[iNSOMniAC]

I was listening the whole time, Blade. I was just scared to believe.

[The StoryTeller]

So now maybe you'll believe?

[iNSOMniAC]

I promise to try.

[The StoryTeller]

Yoda: "Try not. Do you must."

[iNSOMniAC]

Then I'll do it.

[The StoryTeller]

Much better. :)

[iNSOMniAC]

Thanks, Blade... for everything.

[The StoryTeller]

No problem. :) Cease to become the Pain Bearer. Try to become the Happiness Bearer. Maybe change your name on here to that and get a happier pic, just to remind you of it. Or read my writings. :P

[iNSOMniAC]

Oh, the Pain Bearer? It's actually just a goal.
I want to try and help people - basically, I want to take their pain away. The Pain Bearer.

[The StoryTeller]

That actually makes sense... still, don't use it for it's negative terminology anymore, okay? Only for helping taking away other people's pain. And that doesn't mean you have to bear their pain to take it away. I'm only able to do it myself because of all my practice and experience.

[The StoryTeller]

I do like the new pic tho. :)

[iNSOMniAC]

It never was a negative thing. It was one of the few things that kept me semi-happy. I mean, I couldn't come up with any other names, and this one stood out... what's not to like? I like it, anyway.

[The StoryTeller]

Makes sense. I was just thinking... I don't know. There is a way to make the name happy, and still have it mean the same thing.

[iNSOMniAC]

Hmm... I think I got an idea.
I'm changing my title.

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, I like it. The Beamer. I'm prolly gonna end up changing mine too...

[iNSOMniAC]

To what? *tilts head*

[The StoryTeller]

I dunno yet... I'm still thinking on it. Hmmm, how about the, "The StoryTeller?"

[iNSOMniAC]

I like it. c:

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, well good, because I've changed to it. XD

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Wow, for a youngin' you write beautifully! I feel you quite understand the pain in life well for a young man. Bravo. Keep writing!

[The StoryTeller]

Thank you! And I guess, it's just experience. It's not experiences I would want others to go through, but I feel God had me go through them so I can help other people out along the line. I've got... how to put it... strong diverse pain in a lot of areas. And writing is my only way to stay sane and to express it. Glad you liked the poem! And i will. ;)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

I agree completely. I have been through alot of hurt and pain myself and I'm only going on 25. . . My writing started at a young age. 10 to be exact, started out as an assignment in class, and after seeing that it came easily, I started writing for fun. 15 years later, my writing has become a theraputic way out of my chaotic life, and my career choice....

[The StoryTeller]

My writing started at 6 or 7, and came the same way, through a writing assignment in school, i didnt think i was good, and i even procrastinated and just quickly wrote something, but people still loved it.

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Exactly. I didn't procrastinate, though. However, the teacher loved it so much, she made me read it out loud to class. She said she hadn't seen that great of writing at that age, in a long time. I remember, it was some story about a dark stormy night, and a friend of mine stopping at my house to escape the storm. I used some really descriptive words and I thought the teacher was going to jump out of her seat when I read it out loud. Lol....
The rest is history, or at least it will be, when I hit the big time.. Lol

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, agreed, mine was sort of the same way. And good for you! Hope to see you as a writer soon! I aspire to be a writer/rapper/artist so.... We have that in common. :)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

That's awesome! I really think you could succeed. You're excellent with words.

[The StoryTeller]

Eh, I'm not THAT good. xD But maybe. Maybe I just need to believe in myself.

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Yes, you are and you do!

[The StoryTeller]

Lol okay, I'll believe you and believe in myself more. :p

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Good. If I have to, so do you! Lol. I've been saying the same thing. I don't really think my writing's that good, but people keep saying it is...

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, well, we'll do it together I guess.

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Exactly my dear! Support each other all the way to the top!

[The StoryTeller]

lol Okay, I guess we will. :p

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Lol. Good at least you agree. *giggles*

[The StoryTeller]

XD Yeah, it would be kind of hard if I didn't agree. :p