Love is a girl.

Just a short poem (somewhat like haiku, but not) about someone special I know. :p

Eyes as deep as the sea,

Looks, soul, and life like nature,

Love is a lively girl.

Author's Note

This is also on my account on TeenInk.com, RESILIENT_FORVER. Feel free to check me out there too if you wish. I have an older account on TeenInk.com called XCBVIA too.

Reviews

[Lizardo]

True, a girl is what for us is pure love. Delicate and beautiful as a rose but opens when it sees you worthy.
A good poem Blade, I good poem :)

[The StoryTeller]

Yes, especially from a guy's perspective. Glad you could understand Lizardo. :)

[Lizardo]

You're welcome :)

[The StoryTeller]

So have you ever experienced pure love?

[Lizardo]

I have, but It didn't turn out well for me, maybe I'll tell you but in message

[The StoryTeller]

Okay, go ahead, I'd love to hear about it. :)

[Cool Girl]

Very short but very powerful. Nice job!

[The StoryTeller]

Glad you liked it. I had inspiration.

[Cool Girl]

Haha, well good luck with that inspiration:)

[The StoryTeller]

Yeah, thanks, I'll need it.

[Cool Girl]

xD you're welcome...

[The StoryTeller]

Yeah, the only problem is she lives in Newark and I barely see her. Bleh.

[Cool Girl]

xD that stinks..

[The StoryTeller]

Yes, it does.

[Cool Girl]

Well, whatever.. I hope it works out.. eventually:)

[The StoryTeller]

Thank you. :) I think it will.

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome:)

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, don't reply to this okay? Thank you for saying your welcome. I hate how I feel I have to reply to everything. Besides, if you have something you want to say, you can say it on one of our other 3 articles we're talking on. XD

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Love is a lively girl. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[The StoryTeller]

Glad you agree and like it. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[The StoryTeller]

............ :D

[luvs2write]

You created such a nice picture with so few words...I really liked this. Again, different from what you usually write, but I think it's good. Have you ever tried any more haikus? I think you should.

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, I'm glad you liked it. I had inspiration. From a hurt yet beautiful friend I know. Just by looking into her eyes this came to me. Anyways, I can see how it's different. Positive instead of negative. Love instead of hate. And not really, I don't really do haikus. The form that makes it a haiku, 5,7,5, is really hard to make and still say something. But maybe I'll try to write a few more.

[luvs2write]

Yeah, it would almost be like writing a 6 word story...but longer, and it would have to be poetic. Okay, maybe it's not like writing a 6 word story afterall. hmm, I should try it sometime.

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, it is kind of complicated. So, as it seems, everyone thinks I'm amazing and like a prodigy or something, and it's hard for me. So I dunno what that means for others. By the way, I'm not saying I am what people say. I don't like myself to say that I am good. It's not even being humble. People say I'm my own worst enemy, and not just about this.

[luvs2write]

I know what you mean, compliments are horrible. I mean, it's nice that other people think of complimenting you, but then it's hard because you don't believe it. Then you have to act like you believe it so you don't come off as rude...Thats how it is for me, anyway.

[The StoryTeller]

I agree, I don't really act like I believe it, I just calmly and as slyly as I can say how I feel, hoping they don't notice it. But at the same time, I don't really agree with them either. If you look over my comment responses on many of my articles I do that. it's clearly visible as a pattern.